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ECLIPSE— A Screenplay

Could the priest of the parish be the werewolf who ravages his own flock by night?

Father Damen Constantine, sworn to protect the secret of a sacred object with miraculous powers, is hexed by a mysterious figure. Humiliated by having to bear his Holy Week sermons usurped by Silvio Baldessare, a special emissary from the Vatican, Constantine's world is further unsettled by the arrival of a Bishop Leonid from Moscow who seems inordinately interested in legends of lost holy treasures in Cyprus. And his heart is afflicted with an unbridled desire for a newly-arrived French beauty, Orlena Zoria, whose comings and goings are a mystery. His mind in a turmoil, he comes to suspect he's now the very werewolf who ravages his own flock by night -- and then his sacred charge is plundered! With the Eclipse approaching on Good Friday the Thirteenth, he realizes he must gamble his soul to thwart a curse that can engulf the world in pure evil.

(Excerpt - first 10 pages.)

				                 FADE IN:

               EXT. LANDSCAPE - NIGHT

               A silvery HALF-MOON lights the dark contours of the hills 
               and modest countryside villas of south-central Cyprus.

               LEGEND: THE ISLE OF CYPRUS 

               EXT. ORTHODOX CHAPEL - ESTABLISHING

               The Chapel of St. John the Divine, 1000 years of dignity and 
               devotion in rugged mortar and pestle.  It has a round nave, 
               Templar style, and a second story with a balcony and parapet, 
               added at some time, in the rear.  

               Among the ornamental carvings over the doorway, an enigmatic, 
               horned, winged, cloven-footed hermaphrodite GARGOYLE (the 
               figure of "Baphomet")crouches.

               INT. - CHAPEL NAVE

               A Christian Orthodox congregation.  Peasant farm families, 
               dressed in their modest best new clothes, sing an a capella 
               hymn.  Children hold palm-leaf flower holders.  Older boys 
               hold large palm leaves, or sacks of olive leaves.

               In his finery a pillar of sincerity and faith, Father 
               Constantine speaks from the altar.

                                     CONSTANTINE
                         "Behold, the Bridegroom is coming in the 
                         middle of the night: blessed is the 
                         servant He shall find awake. But the one 
                         He shall find neglectful will not be 
                         worthy of Him. Beware, therefore, O my 
                         soul!  Do not fall into deep slumber, 
                         lest you be delivered to death and the 
                         door of the kingdom be closed on you. 
                         Watch instead, and cry out: "Holy, Holy, 
                         Holy are You, O God! Through the 
                         intercession of the angels, have mercy 
                         on us." Amen.  Tonight, in the spirit of 
                         humble servitude, as members in the body 
                         of Christ, let us welcome, from the 
                         Vatican, our guest pastor this holy week -- 
                         Cardinal Silvio Baldessare.

               SILVIO BALDESSARE, 40s, a tall, silver-haired man of 
               unrestrained self-assurance, sharp of features and splendidly 
               arrayed in church vestments, rises from amongst his flanking 
               Deacons, ALDO and MARIO, the Mayor PONTUS, and some local 
               Burghers, to ascend to the altar.

                                     BALDESSARE
                         Thank you, Father, and thank you all 
                         for your hospitality.  It is an honor 
                         to walk, as allies and humble 
                         servants, among the Cypriots, a 
                         treasure of Christendom, bulwark of 
                         the Christian faith for over a 
                         thousand years.  Amen.

               AMEN chorus with approving nods among all the congregation.

                                     CONSTANTINE
                         That the marriage of our people to 
                         Christ the bridegroom remain faithful,  
                         I leave you with these words of our 
                         Savior: "Behold, I send you forth as 
                         sheep in the midst of wolves; be ye 
                         therefore wise as serpents, and 
                         harmless as doves." 

               Constantine leads the hymn of closing, a cappella, the Matins 
               service of Holy Monday. Before the altar, Baldessare, Aldo, 
               and Mario dispense wafers of Communion to the Parishioners.

               MRS. GALEN, a local farm woman, nods encouragement to her 
               daughter, HELENA, a pretty girl in her late teens. 

               Helena kneels before Baldessare. He smiles down at her.

               Baldessare's hand places the wafer on Helena's tongue.

               LATER - SAME

               At the church doors, Constantine engages with his departing 
               parishioners, Mrs. Galen and Helena, as they ripple out.

                                     CONSTANTINE
                              (continuing)
                         Mrs. Galen, Helena. Thank you for 
                         making our guests feel at home.

                                     MRS. GALEN
                         It's very gracious of you, Father.

                                     CONSTANTINE
                         Mr. Galen couldn't --?

                                     MRS. GALEN
                              (nervous)
                         Not tonight. I'm sorry.

               The women hurry along and Baldessare approaches, with Pontus 
               at his side.

                                     PONTUS
                         Matthew ten-sixteen, Father? An 
                         unusual verse for a Palm Sunday.

                                     CONSTANTINE
                         Perhaps not for this one.

               C.U. - ON ICONOSTATIS

               The reredos tapestry barely parts, revealing a woman's eye.

               Mario sniffs the air. He and Aldo exchange a look.

                                     PONTUS
                              (to Baldesssare)
                         First impressions, Cardinal?

                                     BALDESSARE
                         Thrilling simplicity.  A rustic 
                         village with a single road running 
                         through it.  A thousand year history.

                                     PONTUS
                              (nervously polite)
                         Cardinal Baldessare seems to know 
                         all about our little island. Even 
                         including some of the recent history 
                         of our church...

               Pontus fondles his watch chain and chuckles awkwardly.

                                     PONTUS
                              (continuing; sighs)
                         Ahhh.  The troubles that can be caused 
                         by women... coveting gold, and the 
                         treasures of this world...

                                     CONSTANTINE
                         The Cardinal may be disappointed to 
                         learn, such scandals are far from 
                         our own sleepy little village.

                                     BALDESSARE
                         And far be it from me to scratch the 
                         fresh scabs of Orthodox scandal. Not 
                         while the Vatican has wounds of its 
                         own to lick. My only concern is to 
                         foster accommodation--

                                     CONSTANTINE
                              (interrupting)
                         Ah, yes, accommodation, so that our 
                         rustic islanders may trade as freely 
                         in sodomy, as in the Euro?

               Baldessare barks a sharp laugh, clasps Constantine's shoulder.

                                     BALDESSARE
                         I represent the Sister Church. Not 
                         all of the E.U.'s policies.

                                     PONTUS
                              (sharply)
                         As arranged by the Holy See, Father, 
                         with the Patriarchate.

                                     CONSTANTINE
                         Of course. Forgive me, Cardinal.  
                         The doors of God's house must lie 
                         open for a brother priest.

               Constantine bows.  As he turns, he accidentally jostles a 
               stooped OLD HAG, bundled in a shawl and peasant dress, with 
               long, stringy white hair and a scarf obscuring her face.

                                     CONSTANTINE
                         Oh!  Excuse me.

                                     OLD HAG
                         Priest!  Bah!

               The Old Hag spits in Constantine's face.  He reels in shock.

               The Old Hag gestures, menacingly, rasping out a hex.

                                     OLD HAG
                         God's curse on you.  May you crawl 
                         upon four legs.  May the blood of your 
                         loved ones run between your teeth!

               The Old Hag turns to sweep away with surprising speed, leaving 
               the party gaping in astonishment.

                                     BALDESSARE
                         Not a regular at your services, I 
                         gather. 

               Baldessare hands Constantine a handkerchief, with which he 
               dabs his face.

               Baldessare and his Deacons bow in turn, then exit the church. 
               Pontus lingers, displeased.

                                     PONTUS
                         Father, that was shocking.

                                     CONSTANTINE
                         Yes, it certainly was.  Who was that? 

                                     PONTUS
                         I have no idea. I meant, was it 
                         necessary for you to speak so -- 
                         directly with our guest?  They say 
                         he may even be Pope one day.

                                     CONSTANTINE
                              (hoarse whisper)
                         Mayor Pontus, do you think it was 
                         "necessary" for Our Lord to speak so 
                         "directly" with the money lenders in 
                         the Temple?

               The Mayor, displeased but sans retort, snorts and turns away.  

               Constantine closes the church doors on the departing figures.

               PHILANA, a dignified woman, 60s, steps from behind the dias.

                                     PHILANA
                         So. The wolf is at the door.

                                     CONSTANTINE
                         Yes, Philana. Prepare for a lot of 
                         happy talk about respect for local 
                         cultures, while they force us to 
                         renounce our godly laws.

                                     PHILANA
                         What'll you do?

                                     CONSTANTINE
                         What I must.  Be a good shepherd.  
                         And defend my flock.

               EXT. ORTHODOX CHAPEL - NIGHT

               A PHONE RINGS faintly, from within the darkened Chapel.

               INT. CHAPEL HALLWAY - CONTINUOUS

               Philana knocks on a large, oaken door and calls out:

                                     PHILANA
                         Father -- Father Constantine!

               Constantine opens the door. He is in his nightshirt, sleepy.

                                     PHILANA
                              (continuing; anxious)
                         I'm sorry to wake you.  Poor Mrs.  
                         Galen just left a message.  The girl, 
                         Helena -- she's very ill.

                                     CONSTANTINE
                         Really? She seemed fine earlier.  
                         Did they call a doctor?

                                     PHILANA
                         Yes.  He's been there for hours. She 
                         asks for your prayers.

                                     CONSTANTINE
                         I will pray.  While shifting gears.

               EXT. CONSTANTINE'S LAND ROVER - NIGHT

               Constantine speeds across the dark, rugged terrain.

               EXT. GALEN HOME - MOMENTS LATER

               Constantine crosses the front yard to the peasant farm home, 
               past a tethered goat and a perched, sleeping rooster.

               Constantine's KNOCK at the door is answered by a fretting 
               peasant woman, Mrs. Galen, who gestures for him to enter.

               INT. GALEN HOME - CONTINUING

               Constantine moves to the bedside of the murmuring Helena.

               The DOCTOR withdraws a stethoscope from her chest, looks 
               gravely at Constantine.

                                     DOCTOR
                         Fever.  Nothing helps. We tried an 
                         icy bath, as a last resort.

               Constantine kneels, taking the sick girl's hand.

               The door to the hut slams open against the wall.  MR.  GALEN, 
               drunk, roars into the house, flask in hand.

                                     MR. GALEN
                         Potato harvest is here. And I lose 
                         my only child. Who will work the 
                         fields now?  Tell me.

                                     MRS. GALEN
                         Father, forgive him.  It is the vodka 
                         talking.

               Constantine stands up to confront the drunken man.

                                     CONSTANTINE
                         Then the vodka is a fool.  
                              (to Mrs. Galen)
                         Now, please.  Help me with the girl.

                                     MRS. GALEN
                         What?

                                     CONSTANTINE
                              (lifts her)
                         I need to take her back to the parish. 
                         With me. Alone.

               Mr. Galen clutches Constantine's tunic, pulls him from Helena.

                                     MR. GALEN
                         Holy man, hands rubbed smooth from 
                         praying.  You would rob me of my 
                         child in her final hour of life?

                                     CONSTANTINE
                         You don't understand.  There might 
                         be a way to save her.

               Mr. and Mrs. Galen look at the doctor, who lowers his gaze 
               and shakes his head somberly.

               Mr. Galen thinks about that for a second, decides he doesn't 
               like it, and belts Constantine in the chops.

                                     MRS. GALEN
                         Father!

               Mrs. Galen rushes to the fallen Constantine.

               The Doctor, aghast, also starts forward, but he shrinks back 
               as Mr. Galen turns his sullen, menacing gaze on him.

                                     MR. GALEN
                         No. Let God work a miracle for his 
                         holy man.

               Constantine, rising to one knee, wipes blood from his mouth.

                                     CONSTANTINE
                              (muttered prayer)
                         Father, not for my sake --

               Constantine springs up, uncorking a manly punch that spins 
               Mr. Galen in a semi-circle before he collapses to the floor.

                                     CONSTANTINE
                              (continuing; to Mrs.  
                              Galen)
                         In the spirit of love.  Now, please -- 
                         help me with your daughter.

               Mrs. Galen, aghast, nods, and moves to help Constantine lift 
               Helena from the bed.

               EXT. ORTHODOX CHAPEL - NIGHT

               As the Land Rover pulls up to the chapel, Philana emerges.

                                     CONSTANTINE
                         Philana.  I told you to sleep.

                                     PHILANA
                         But you need help.

                                     CONSTANTINE
                         How do you always know?

                                     PHILANA
                         I am a woman.

               Constantine and Philana carry Helena inside the chapel.

               INT. ORTHODOX CHAPEL - SAME

               Constantine and Philana lay Helena before the altar. Flanking 
               iconic paintings seem to bear witness.

                                     CONSTANTINE
                         Apply a cold compress. Talk to her, 
                         until I come back.

               Constantine strokes Helena's brow. Then, he breaks away.

               Constantine moves swiftly, into a narrow hallway, stopping 
               at a certain spot to tap a stone in the wall.

               The stone's false face swivels open to reveal a key hanging 
               on a metal hook.  Constantine withdraws the key.

               INT. STAIRWELL - CELLAR

               An iron door opens at the head of the stairs. Constantine 
               enters and lights a torch, which he takes from its holder on 
               the stone wall.  Carefully descending the ancient steps, he 
               wavers as a stone turns under his foot.

                                     CONSTANTINE
                              (muttering)
                         Priest found dead with broken neck...

               INT. TREASURE TROVE STORAGE ROOM - SAME

               Constantine plays the torchlight over the rough-hewn 
               subterranean wall.  He takes hold of a staff leaning against 
               the wall.  Feeling the wall, he finds a stone slightly 
               protuberant from the rest.  He pulls it halfway out.

               A section of wall stands out and slides aside on rollers and 
               pulleys.  Another heavy iron door awaits inside.

               Constantine pulls a skeleton key from a pocket and unlocks 
               the massive door.  As he enters the vault, his torch 
               illuminates a glittering treasure trove of gold and jewels.

               Bypassing the hoard, Constantine  proceeds to a dark corner 
               of the vault.  There, he gropes beneath the platform and 
               unlatches a hidden switch.

               Hidden gears turn, and a section of the treasure tableaux 
               rolls away, revealing a trap door in the floor, bound by an 
               ancient combination lock of Arab design.  Constantine leans 
               the staff against the wall and kneels to turn the knob, 
               listening carefully as he does.

               Constantine pulls open this vault door in the floor.  

               Standing, he takes the staff and lowers it into the recess.  
               A steel blade sweeps across the opening and SNAPS the staff 
               clean in two.  

               With this trap sprung, Constantine bends to lift a smallish, 
               locked wooden box from the hole.

               INT. ORTHODOX CHAPEL - LATER

               Philana presses a cold compress on the forehead of the quietly 
               babbling Helena. Constantine, now dressed in his holy 
               vestments, emerges into the chapel, carrying the box.

                                     CONSTANTINE
                              (to Philana)
                         Thank you. You may go now.

                                     PHILANA
                         But--

                                     CONSTANTINE
                         Please.

               Philana, confused, hesitantly exits.

               Constantine lays the box upon the altar, next to Helena's 
               shoulder. He carefully unlatches and opens it.

               Constantine delicately withdraws an ancient, damaged CROWN 
               OF THORNS.  He holds the object raptly before his face.

                                     CONSTANTINE
                              (continuing; rapt)
                         O greatest of treasures, so fragile... 
                         lend me a spark of thy eternal grace.

               Constantine gently lowers the ghastly crown onto her head. 

               The thorns pierce the flesh of Helena's forehead. Little 
               droplets of blood trickle down her face.

               Constantine closes his eyes. A LIGHT glows from within him.  
               It slowly spreads to engulf Helena.

               Helena emits cries of mingled pain and ecstasy.

               Constantine remains dispassionate as Helena writhes.  At 
               length, their glow fades. He withdraws the crown.

               Helena's pierced forehead heals instantly as the thorns are 
               withdrawn from her scalp.

               C.U. - ON ICONOSTATIS

               Philana's wide open eye stares through the curtain opening.

               INSIDE THE CLOISTER - ON PHILANA

               Philana, nearly swooning, sits back and crosses herself.

               EXT. GALEN HOME - DAWN

               Constantine's Land Rover pulls up to the yard.

               The front door bursts open.  Mr. Galen, bleary-eyed, steps 
               out, pointing a shotgun.  Helena cries out and intercedes.

                                     HELENA
                         No, Papa! It's me! I'm all right!

               Mr. Galen blinks, swaying.  He drops the gun. Staggers 
               forward. Falls to his knees. Mrs. Galen appears at the door.

                                     MRS. GALEN
                         Oh, Father, you did it.

                                     CONSTANTINE
                         Not I. The Holy Spirit. Tell no one.        
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